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Today’s prompt: Write anything around the theme or words: Trapped in my ancient fear
Here is my attempt for today’s’ prompt:
Trapped in my ancient fear
Those languid branches of the wild oak
pickled in the snow
are riddled with the worries
of the harsh winters
Deep in its thoughts
of unspoken fear
of the flight or the fight
I sit here,
near the window sill of my old apartment
giving it a second chance
to scrape away
those sullen memories off my mind
which has cast an impression all these years
the unexplained trepidation which sits neatly in the folds
of my mind
knotted with the worries of you leaving the threshold
and never looking back
I’m trapped in my ancient fear
of days soaked in my tears
in my heaving bosom
when love leaves and never returns.
–Megha Sood
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Oh my goodness how this tugs at the heart. Your expression of ancient fear is phenomenal.
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Thanks so much Beth.Yes some fear never changes its shape or form.
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Keep captivating my soul, Megha. Love this as always.
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Good stuff here 👍🏾
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Here is my poem. Emily
https://musingsofasouleclectic.wordpress.com/2019/10/01/solitary/
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Such a great last line for this poem Emily.
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Trapped
I can hear the flies buzzing
so I think I must have died
In life I could shoo them away
open a window
to persuade them through,
though usually they were
too stupid
to grasp the chance of freedom
offered and escape.
Now there is no window to be
opened.
We’re trapped in this closed space
with only our fears,
our most ancient fears
for company.
Eternal night.
No possibility
of freedom,
or escape.
Not for me.
Not for them.
Lynn White
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Now, Lynn, this was scary.
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Creepily fantastic!
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taking a turn…
expanding the walls
allowing for deeper breaths
and a head that’s clear
it’s not scary out there
but remaining penned inside my head
has me trapped in my ancient fear
remaining unnoticed seems important
quietly escaping as a way to cope
seeking anywhere but here
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Many times we all want to be unnoticed. Thanks for contributing.
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Hope you enjoy! https://iwriteher.com/2019/10/01/sanctuary/
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I did! Awesome piece.
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Thanks, Devereaux! 🙂
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I liked your line “barrier between sanity and insanity.” Great work.
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Thanks! 😁
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👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾
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What an interesting form of poetry. That was new to me. Excellent imagery in this.
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Leslie was trapped in her own house. At least till the buzzer on the dryer buzzed.
Her mother had said once, and it stuck, “Don’t ever leave the house without clean underwear on, what if you are in an accident?”.
Well, anyway, that’s my take.
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Ha! Made me giggle.
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https://joem18b.wordpress.com/2019/10/01/trapped-in-my-ancient-fear/
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Made me really think about someone feeling trapped. Thanks for contributing.
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Thank you Devereaux and Beth… here is my official response to today’s prompt… https://tedstrutz.com/2019/10/01/words-of-wisdom/
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My take along with the Monster She Wrote prompt – https://www.djranch.org/2019/10/01/frankenstein-et-al/
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Whew 😓
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Well done Donna!
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I wrote a story about a fear instilled by my Grandpa when I was just a lad. He used to tell me, “Never play cards with a man called Doc.” He told me quite a few other things as well but I selected this one for this prompt.
https://tnkerr.wordpress.com/2019/10/01/never-play-cards-with-a-man-called-doc/
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Love this!
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Thanks for the story. Brings back memories of watching old westerns.
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Thank you for joining us with your piece.
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