I’m into my third week of Lockdown, here in Geelong, and this old poem of mine, “Loneliness”, seems to be appropriate, on this cold and wet weekend.
Loneliness
Loneliness, is watering your garden vegetables
And having no-one by your side to watch them grow
Loneliness, is playing your favourite sad song
And having no-one listening to you singing out of tune
Loneliness, is viewing your family photo album
And having no-one to share your private memories with
Loneliness, is being home sick, oh so very sick
And having no-one to tend to your aches and selfish moans
Loneliness, is awakening to the crisp morning dew
And having no-one to feel the warmth of your heart at sunrise
Loneliness, is walking a sandy beach until the tide comes in
And having no-one to hold when the ocean finally covers you
Loneliness, is lying upon your empty bed
And having no-one, having no-one here at all
Ivor Steven (c) Oct 2017
Featured Photo: Courtesy of Neil Robinson, Geelong, 2017.
G’day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I’m an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer. I’ve been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I’ve been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems. View all posts by ivor20
Powerful poem.
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Thanks Andrew…. the original version was written way before I started blogging,
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You’re welcome.
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May your writing and blogging keep you going, lock down is strange, isolating and sometimes a bit scary. I am out of four months shield lock down now, it feels strange after so long to have the liberty to walk outside my garden gate or to spend time with people including my better half. If I didn’t write and blog I don’t know what would have kept me sane, oh okay, safely insane.
Hang in there, mate, it’s not forever
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yes Jez, if it wasn’t for my writing and blogging, I would be more insaner… 😀😉
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Such a poignant poem Ivor.
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Thank you Sadje, the old poem, seemed to go with our present situation.. 😊
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It’s does. It’s strange how things repeat themselves.
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Indeed. 😊
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👍
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There are times, Ivor, when I crave a little loneliness, just to get some peace and quiet for a while…
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Yes,.. we all need our own space, at certain times 😊
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Oh, I know this feeling, Ivor.
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Maybe it’s catching, like a virus….
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Yes. You are good at putting it into words. I wanted to write a longer response, but the words escape me.
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Your poem is beautiful and yet sad, Ivor. It made my heart ache❤️ I agree it is fitting for these days of isolation. Sending hugs❤️
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Thank you Sue,… I’ll get over to this lockdown and isolation in due course, but the loneliness from those years gone by, still linger on 🙄
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A very accurate description of loneliness, Ivor. I know how you and so many others feel.
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Thank you Kim, they were hard times when I wrote the original poem.. 7 years ago… 🙄
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And always and forever this it will ever more be…very effectively and powerfully evoked poem. Well done solitary soul ❤❤❤
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Thank you, there are different sorts of loneliness,, and we cope in different ways. 🙄🌏
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Indeed. One step at a time…Bless you ❤🥰
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An effective reflection of loneliness. Wonderfully written, Ivor.
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Thanks again Eugenia, I like TBF… and how the encourages me to search through my older files/poems, and find and appropriate piece. 😊📁
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Most welcome, Ivor. I like TBF too but sometimes I can’t get to it. Btw, my new submission was accepted by Spillwords and will be published tomorrow. 😊
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Well Done Eugenia….
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Thank you!
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Potent, so real and uncontrived, leaves a very real ache in my heart. And love the featured photo too.
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Thank you Paul, I warmly appreciate your kind words. ☺
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My pleasure Ivor.
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