We have had a couple of in depth poetry discussions over the last couple of weeks and a big thank you for taking part in the conversations. Today I thought I would bring a lighter air and a bit of fun to the Café and have a little poetry competition.
Earlier this week I had been doing some reading and came across what is claimed to be the world’s shortest poem. It is titled, Lines on the Antiquity of Microbes, or Fleas as it is more commonly known. The poem is a couplet written by Strickland Gillilan.
Adam
Had e’m
Ogden Nash wrote a poem in a similar vein called Further Reflections on Parsley.
Parsley
Is Gharsley
In 1975 boxer Muhammed Ali was giving a speech at Harvard University and discussing poetry on stage with journalist George Plimpton. When asked for the shortest poem of all time, Plimpton recited “Fleas” and Ali responded, “I’ve got one: Me? Whee!”
The challenge in the café today, is can you write the world’s shortest poem? I don’t know what rules apply but let’s keep the Poetry Police on their toes and have a no rules competition. Here’s my offering to start (in the style of Spike Milligan.)
Poe
Ate
Tree
The prize is a big high five from the baristas. The floor is yours.
Yes, I think I can!
My One Word Poem
By Charles Robert Lindholm
Perhaps . . . . ?
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My One Word Poem #2
By Charles Robert Lindholm
Maybe . . . . ?
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Clever Charles. I will dwell on those perhaps, maybe 🙂
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Pondering? Ha! Glad you liked them. I love your question posts!!
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I shall hopefully keep you on your toes every Thursday then Charles 🙂
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My short n sweet will be…
Rome
Man
Ticks.
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Thank you for your poetry. This has many meanings and in three words leaves a lot to consider.
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Thank you Davy D for amazing comment… yes three words n many more imaginations..😉
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🙂
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Here’s my contribution:
Winging life,
Every day.
Fiona
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I think it is the best way to live life Fiona. A very good short poem. Thank you for sharing it with us.
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It keeps each day interesting.
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And thank you.
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A pleasure Fiona.
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Link for my attempt..
https://throughmyheartweb.wordpress.com/2017/07/20/6252/
😇😇
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Thank you 😉
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Short Poem Challenge… Fun
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Thank you for sharing this on your blog, it is most appreciated 🙂
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Not a comment on the exercise you set, Davy, but … HOW ABOUT . . .
Terse
Verse
Is worse!
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I was expecting a quality submission from yourself Roland and you have provided it. Thank you.
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H’m shortest poem…
Words erect emotion
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Lovely Sangbad.. 😇
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😊
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Nice words and short poetry Sangbad. These few words evoke powerful images. Thank you for sharing.
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Thanks Davy…
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Breathe
Deeply
My ache
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Beautiful Christine, this one turns you inside out.
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It is tough to get big emotional impact in so few words
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I agree Christine, but you managed it. Sometimes these shorter poems are much more difficult to write.
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Learning to be more spare and lean in my writing is a challenge but I am working on it.
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🙂
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Intriguing Poem Challenge from Davy D at the Go Dog Go Cafe
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Here is my entry:
Not praying,
But saying.
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Nice one storyspiller and thank you for taking part.
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Heck, I’ll drop one:
We loved,
Enough.
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Very clever Colin, another one that has lots of different meanings. Thank you.
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Catch it
To hatch it
Then match it
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Nice one Eugenia. It may take me a while to get to the core of this one 🙂
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😎
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Here’s mine:
Believe.
Be you.
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Good one, and something to live by. Thank you for getting involved and visiting the cafe.
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Here’s mine guys…
Puzzled
Confused
In love.
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I like this Mich. It can be read and interpreted in a number of ways. Thank you for sharing it with us.
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As always Davy…
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A fun poetry challenge.
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Thanks for reblogging this Mich.
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I want to share the fun with my readers..
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My very late Entry to this Intriguing Challenge.
“Life & Death”
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No time limits storyteller. Thank you for your poem. It conjures up many thoughts and images.
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Sorry for the late entry but here is my contribution to the challenge.
Can I…I can
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Jerry, is this what they call a reverse couplet, if not you have just invented it. Excellent and thanks for getting involved.
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I know I didn’t invent it because when I was little and told my mother I was going to do something stupid she would always say, “oh you are…are you?”
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🙂
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Hi! Here’s my try –
sun,
moon,
eloped.
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❤
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Love it, V!
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Nice one vidur and thank you for sharing.
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Zen drops
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Thank you Zen Drops. There are a number of ways to interpret this.
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I agree. 🙂
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Terrifugia
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🙂
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Love. Unconditionally. It’s Possible.
– This begs the question of what we define as a poem and if it can actually be defined, and not just by the scribings of a rule book from the first man or woman who wrote it. But at the same time, the transformation for modern standards I wouldn’t say apply here, for the sake of “keeping up with the times” – as some things in life must remain traditional, otherwise they lose all meaning and value, as well as the things they once stood for. Just my two…three…four cents.
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Nice words and you put together a very thoughtful argument. I think tradition gives us our history and highlights where we have come from. Poetry is a journey and we can move it on in any way we want to. Thanks for your thoughts and poetry.
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I love this so much! Very clever and love the playing on words.
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Thank you and glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for taking time to visit and comment.
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Thanks for reblogging this! I loved it the second time too! You come up with the best questions!!!
Pondering . . much lately! LOL!
Chuck
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A pleasure Charles 🙂
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