‘Foreign World’ is a poem that I originally wrote in December 2017, and here today this a revised version from April 2019.
Featured Image Below: reproduced here with the kind permission of, Derrick Knight
Foreign World(Revised)
I’ve been stuck inside this shabby carapace
Wondering if I’ll ever be able to about-face
Maybe I could borrow my angel’s wings, unfurled
Explore and travel the open foreign world
Time has come, to escape this holding place
Discovering, I’m able to find lost grace
To wander the harvest field
Now I see beyond the shield
Rid the shackles of my broken heart
Return to reality, and apply for a restart
Healthy enough to hide from prying ghouls
Free to walk past the tardy bar stools
Go flying, with all the other old fools
And paddle ankle-deep in life’s distant pools
Ivor Steven (c) April 20190
G’day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I’m an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer. I’ve been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I’ve been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems. View all posts by ivor20
In short, time to live again
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Yes .. I survived and here I am
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Cool.
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It seems kind of prescient that you wrote this before the pandemic…
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Yes .. I’m a contemporary oracle 😎🌏
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Reblogged this on Ivor.Plumber/Poet and commented:
For this weeks “Throwback Friday” article over at Go Dog Go Cafe, I have chosen my poem “Foreign World”
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Just wonderful Ivor💜
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Thank you Willow 😊🌏💕
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AW and OH! Another perfect pairing of Derrick’s photo and your poem, Ivor!
(((HUGS))) 🙂
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Thank you once more for creating a poem so fitting for my picture. You express the donkey’s joy of life.
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And thank you for your wonderful photos Derrick .. I appreciate your kindness 😊🌏
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Beautiful, Ivor! It’s a good thing to live your life doing things you enjoy, writing poems that make other people happy, supporting worthy causes. You make a difference. If you are in doubt, ask Frankie. Or ask any of your fans 🙂
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Thank you Cheryl for your kindness 😊🌏💕
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