I wrote this poem on a wet and cloudy day, on September 16th, 2019, and ironically three years later, today is exactly the same …
Lodestone Clouds (Revised)
I saw a blink in her golden eye
As the purple nebula covered her sky
I felt her aloha clouds pulsate
As I stepped into her open gate
Then I caressed her crystal tears
As her misty showers melted my fears
I gently glided onto her feathered dome
As her glowing lodestones enticed me home
Ivor Steven (c) September 16th 2019
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G’day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I’m an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer. I’ve been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I’ve been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems. View all posts by ivor20
Go Dog Go Café 
Mesmerising
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Thank you Derrick for your marvellous comment
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Beautiful poem Ivor
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Thank you kindly Sadje .. sorry for not visiting your site much lately… my time is being by “Tullawalla” commitments 📘🤗💕
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You’re welcome! No worries my friend
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Blissful and flowing. Beautiful penning, Ivor.
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Thanks Eugenia.. nature inspires my imagination 💚🌏🤗
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Mine too, Ivor!
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Reblogged this on Ivor.Plumber/Poet and commented:
My poem “Lodestone Clouds”, from September 2019 is up on Throwback Friday at ‘Go Dog Go Cafe’ magazine.
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Vivid imagery, Ivor! Reading this poem is like being in that moment with you. ❤
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Thank you kindly Cheryl.. I do like posting these Throwback poems .. . They are always pleasantly surprising 🤗💕📘
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Beautiful poem and love the video too!
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Thank you Barbara… I am ecstatic with how my self published book turned out and Judy the editor/publisher at Jaymah Press has been absolutely fabulous .. 📘🌏🤗💕📖
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I read your book, and it is a polished gem!
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Thank you Barbara .. 📘🌏🤗💕
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I like reading your poems out loud. 🙂 This one flowed so beautifully! I brought a smile, and touched my heart! ❤️
(((HUGS))) 🙂
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Thanks Carolyn.. I liked this vivid little poem too … 💕🌏🤗🌥
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🙂
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It, not I. Oopy! 🙂
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Oopy .. I understood anyhow 😊
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HA! Good. Sometimes my fingers get ahead of the rest of me and they type what THEY want to! 😉 😛 😀
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I do the same but I am worserer 🤗📖
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HA! 😀 😉 At least you are not the worsererest! 😛
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“Caressed her crystal tears”~ such tender and poetic imagery! Thank you for sharing. I’m your newest fan.
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Thank you kindly Aspen 🤗🌏
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