
Today’s poem was written in December 2018, I was in hospital at the time, and there seemed no end to my daily pain. Here I am presenting a revised version
Beyond Pain, There is More (a Revised Poem)
It’s eleven seventeen
I not not nineteen
Anymore
Old warriors are bold
I will not be told
Anymore
Today’s pain will heal
Life is not a race
Anymore
Tired eyes are closing
I am not going fishing
Anymore
Sands of time have been
I will not remain unseen
Anymore
My feet are willing to travel
I am not covered in gravel
There is more
Ivor Steven (c) December 2018
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G’day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I’m an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer. I’ve been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I’ve been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems. View all posts by ivor20
Indeed we always have more…❤️
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Thank you kindly Joel
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You are welcome
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Indeed, we all do have more; it’s an inevitable part of life. Thank you for sharing this profound post from another time in your life. Be well, my friend.
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Thank you for reading and for your lovely comments Nancy. .. I’m back in bed again .. it seems the best way .. I do my back exercises.. a bit of reading .. 20mins max on the computer, but no blogging.. a bite to eat and then rest again … it’s now been 7 days and I’ve still a long way to go … 🤗🌏
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Sitting at the computer is back-breaking, literally! I also do my exercises on the bed; if I try to get down on the floor I will never get up again lol! All my writing and blogging is done on my MacBook. I have an adjustable laptop tray which is designed to elevate my Mac so I’m not bending my neck to read; everything is at eye level and it’s much more comfortable for me. My therapist recommended it. It’s good to get up and move around every 30 minutes or so, even if it’s for 5-10 minutes. It’s so easy to lose track of time while writing! Patience and time, Ivor. Patience and time. Be well! 💫
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Thank you for those handy hints Nancy… I have an iPad, which is ok, but mainly I use my desktop computer … I’m a terrible typer.. so I need the bigger keyboard .. I’ll have to investigate your tray idea 😉
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Reblogged this on Ivor.Plumber/Poet and commented:
My poem “Beyond Pain, There is More” is up at Throwback Friday on “Go Dog Go Cafe”
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Great poem so much feeling, reminds me of when I was in hospital after breaking my back .
The sing is brilliant too. I said to you before he reminds me of David Gray. …here’s a track to demonstrate what I mean.
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Thank you Willow, and thanks for the songs
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A pleasure Ivor 💜
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🤗🌏
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A sad song but I’ve been reading personal war account books and I don’t think people as a whole realize the sacrifices made, or maybe they refuse to.
Sent from my iPhone
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Thank you kindly… for your thoughtful comments … there is too much pain in our world 🤗🌏
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Yes, there is more.
(((HUGS))) ❤️
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Haha .. I’m hoping so .. Frankie hasn’t had a walkie for 8 days 🤗🌏🐶💕
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Aw, poor Sir Frankie. I’m sure he can sense you are hurting and he wants you to get well soon. ❤️
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Woof woof 🐶 from Frankie … he’s a good pal 🤗💕🐶
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Woof Woof back to Sir Frankie from Coop! 🙂
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Get well soon very Ivor, keep up with the stretching. 🙂
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Thanks Sue… 7.20pm Saturday and I’m back in bed already .. but it’s the best way to stay away from the computer… I’ve done exceptionally well.. averaging only three 20 sittings a day .. hopefully in 4 or 5 days I’ll be able to start writing again … I’m losing patience with this little iPone … again thank Sue for lovely encouragement ..🤗🌏💕
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Haha, that should have read Get Well VERY soon! 😂
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Oh, I hope you feel better soon, Ivor!💖
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Thanks Eugenia, I’m improving but it’s slow.. I’m afraid my writings are postponed until I’m well enough to sit at the computer … hopefully very soon .. I’ll have my self published version of “Tullawalla” to promote during the week .. 🤗🌏💕
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Thank you for the link
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