
Today I am presenting a nostalgically insightful poem that I wrote in May 2018
Secrets of Mine
When I was ten and brave
I climbed our tree, a giant Peppercorn
Nearly midnight, and clambered stark naked
Maybe it was a full moon
When I was fourteen and timid
I quickly kissed the girl next door
Under a midday sun, bashfully red-faced
Maybe it was springtime
When I was seventeen, my voice had broken
I met a gorgeous schoolgirl
I’d walk her home, hand in hand, and in love
I shyly asked her to marry me
She was wiser than me, and said no
I was young and naïve
When I was twenty-six and carefree
I married the girl of my dreams
We needed shelter and a home
I went to the local bank for a loan
I lied to the manager and declared assets falsely
We moved into our house and lived happily ever-after
Ivor Steven (c) May 2018
G’day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I’m an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer. I’ve been blogging for over 4 years, and writing poems for 20 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I’ve been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems. View all posts by ivor20
Wonderful
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Thank you Derrick 😁
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Reblogged this on Ivor.Plumber/Poet and commented:
Over on Go Dog Go Cafe, my Throwback Friday poem is, ‘Secrets of Mine’
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A delightful piece, Ivor! 🌺
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Thank you Eugenia.. those delightful years of learning through experience 💕🤗🌏
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Most welcome, Ivor!
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Fabulous! 🙂
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Yeah .. when I young and cheeky 💕🤗🌏
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A delightful poem, Ivor! It makes me smile. ❤
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Yeah .. we were young and adventurous back then and enjoying a life of togetherness 💕🌏🤗
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What a lovely beautiful poetry :)))
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Thanks Pragalbha … we were a young couple find our way in life .. 😍😎🌏
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:)))
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That is quite a story! I love your nostalgic trip down memory lane!
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I needed that old poem to drag my thoughts away from these distressing times ..
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It was a good one!’
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