Often thoughts, words and even full writing come to me while walking. This was written during one of my daily walks just about a year ago. The words appear almost completely unedited from when I hammered them out on my phone as I walked.
I like to think of it in the form of how I hear one of my favorite bands (Silver Jews). Their writing and cadence of delivery was in my head as the words flowed.
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with these steps the song will be written
that barking dog doesn’t scare me anymore, there was just something on his mind
now weathered and unmarked, roadside posts no longer lead the way
these endless right turns have you dizzy and ready to move on
roads ahead are unknown, but circles never reach tomorrow
red with beauty, winter berries hung upon the weeping shrub
drawing my gaze were orange shutters framing the mustard home
what is the wish of the oak as it envies the redwood
chimneys choke down yesterday’s forest while chasing away winter’s blues
stone walls stare down the seasons, sharing no secrets
raging passion, not anger carries the fight to defend
tattered flags wave farewell as the wind takes troubles away
those manicured lawns tended to by the busy mind cannot hide the pain inside
refusing to face these problems has you slipping in place
a lone hawk stands upon a barren branch as a distant spring stands in delay

some Silver Jews to get you acquainted
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There’s a lot to like about that poem, it’s cool how it spilled out. Editing and revising might kill it.
And thanks for hipping me to The Silver Jews!
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How the inspirations, they just, hit us, when we don’t expect them to, when we’re, just, going about our, days…
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truly love your flow and inspriations shared. so awesome 👏👏👏
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