
I wrote the original version this poem back in December 2017, and here I am presenting a revised edition that I wrote today
River Of Destiny (Revised)
I am going to see a lady of Wizardry
In the grey house of mystery
Over the bridge, strong and earthy
To find my path to bravery
Not to be judged lightly
But to be cured internally
I do bow to a Queen, so ghostly
In the castle of stone, so empty
On the edge of the Red Sea
To find my way eventually
Not to be forlorn and angry
But to face friends and foe calmly
Searching for life’s secret duty
In the distant Abbey, so eerie
Beyond the boundaries, down along the valley
To find my river of destiny
Not to be trialed for my insanity
But to be unveiled for my humanity
Ivor Steven (c) October 2021
G’day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I’m an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer. I’ve been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I’ve been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems. View all posts by ivor20
Really awesome poem Ivor! I love it! Xx
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Thank you Carol 😊🌏💕
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I am now curious to read the original as this one is very good! (I’m thinking the original was equally good!)
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Thank you for reading and here is the original
https://ivors20.wordpress.com/?s=River+of+Destiny+
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Beautiful
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Thank you Shreya 💕🌸🌹🌺
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Beautiful 😻
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Thank you kindly 😊🌏
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