
The original version of ‘Sailing By’ I wrote back in 2012, and this revised piece is from July 2018
Sailing By
Gone, a day, weeks, years
Gone, sailing by, lonely tears
Gone, sailing by, the good times
Gone, the years of a lifetime
What’s the difference between desire and passion?
What’s the chance of finding one in billion?
There are millions in the oceans of the world
There are thousands of beats to every new heart
What’s the difference between love and pain?
What’s the chance of falling in love again?
There are millions of stars in the Milky-Way
There are hundreds of dreams about love yesterday
What’s the difference between the sea and the sky?
What’s the chance of sharing the horizon in July?
There’s no answers to your questions
There are months of wonders in the four seasons
What’s the difference between the calm and the storm?
What’s the chance of being forever warm?
There are dozens of lies before the truth
There were two lives under your roof
Gone, a day, weeks, years
Gone, sailing by, your soft tears
Gone, sailing by, the good times
Gone, the years of your lifetime
Ivor Steven (c) July 2018
G’day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I’m an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer. I’ve been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I’ve been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems. View all posts by ivor20
Beautiful and lyrical like a ballad. Reminds me of Sailing by Christopher Cross.
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Thank you Eugenia .. I’ll look that one up 😊🌏💕
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Reblogged this on Ivor.Plumber/Poet and commented:
Good morning readers .. today the reblogg button worked .. thank you to “Sue” for her advice of trying a different channel/page
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A touching poem 😌
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Thank you kindly ..😊🤗
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A powerful poignant poem, Ivor. The original and this revision. Thank you for sharing it with us. It does flow like a song that takes up home in the brain and the heart.
(((HUGS)))
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That really is touchingly superb
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Thank you Derrick .. they were emotional times 😊😢
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Perfect 💜
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