Far and wide the river ran
Outside of my heart running deep
Carving stone waters rushing
There I stood at the edge
Almost falling in
Hollow and alone I saw the rushing
Feelings pass me by
As I let the river rush along
Never touching the deep
For where I go
No one can follow
And where I tred
None can comfort
My absent mind believing that the
Waters will poison me
Long and empty I stood at the
Water’s edge not knowing that
Comfort
Wholeness
Acceptance
And
Deliverance
Lay on the other side.
This poem is directly inspired by the Tuesday Writing Prompt Challenge found here at Go Dog Go Cafe. The prompt this time was “ where I go no one can follow”. I am working through older prompts to help spark my imagination. Tune in tomorrow to see the new challenge for this week! Photo by Toa Heftiba on Unsplash
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Liyona is an “average joe” kind of writer who likes to think about ordinary things and then write them down. Ever since she can remember, she has been rhyming words and creating lyric poems. During her college years, she took a more serious bent toward writing and started to post on her blog (The Life and Times of a Quirky Character.) Currently, she resides on the East Coast of the United States just north of the country’s capital.
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Just so beautiful and poignant, Liyona 🙏
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Thank you!
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I love how you structured this, Liyona! It increases the intensity.
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Thank you!!
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