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Today’s prompt: Use the phrase In the fading light
Happy writing!
Lovely prompt!
Far Horizons, Distant Dreams
Once the light shone so brightly
that time and distance stretched for ever,
the horizon at infinity strung with the pearls
of distant dreams.
And in between
a hinterland
of possibilities
just waiting to be grasped.
But then, as the light dimmed,
time and distance collapsed inwards
dragging the horizon closer
a hinterland
of rubble
in between,
the spent remains
of possibilities
uncompleted
or untried.
Only the dreams stretched further
beyond the horizon now
in the fading light.
Soon I’ll reach them
and perhaps discover myself
as part of someone else’s dream.
Lynn White
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Excellent! Very visual
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thank you!
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Loved lines 3 and 4 and the imagery. I think we all wish dreams stretch further, and wonderful to be part of someone else’s dream. Lovely poem.
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Thank you
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The hitherlan of possibilities! Love that phrase. Thanks for sharing!
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thank you
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Wonderful, Lynn. I love the idea of being part of someone else’s dream.
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Thank you
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Here is my prose poem “Love is never too far”
https://meghasworldsite.wordpress.com/2020/10/13/love-is-never-too-far/
Thanks so much, Beth and Deveraux for challenging us.
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Love this! I love how the perspective is from “her” point of view but then at the end you bring the reader into a place of “you”.
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Thanks so much Liyona for reading it so intently.
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Here’s my take on the lovely prompt. Thank you for the challenge
https://mindfills.wordpress.com/2020/10/13/lulling-a-haiku/
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Thanks for sharing! I am impressed that you fit in both those prompts!!
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Thank you for reading and writing in. Really appreciate it.
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The candle’s flame flutters
Wax accumulates below
White lava, forming new ground
The light dims
As his breaths shallow
Any time now
The room is calm
The only noises
A ticking clock
And his breaths
The candle shrinks
The wick is nearly consumed
A final flutter
And one last exhale
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I can very much relate to this. October 15 my dad will have been gone 6 years, and I was lucky enough to be there for the last exhale. Thank you for joining us.
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Very sorry for your loss. I have only experienced the “last exhale” with my cat, and a rat lol Thank you for welcoming me
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Oof this is SO good! I just finished a book called The Memory Police your poem reminds me of it. The mixture of person and thing I love it!
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Very kind of you! I’m curious about your book. Do you happen to have a link?
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Here is a link! https://www.google.com/search?gs_ssp=eJzj4tVP1zc0zDA1zCrMLigxYPQSLMlIVchNzc0vqlQoyM_JTE4FALhpC1k&q=the+memory+police&oq=the+memory+police&aqs=chrome.1.69i57j46j0j69i60l2.7808j0j4&client=ms-android-verizon&sourceid=chrome-mobile&
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Thanks, I look forward to checking it out!
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Very cozy!
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Reblogged this on Life and Times of a Quirky Character and commented:
Oh! So today’s prompt is “In the fading light”. I am thinking I might take a break from my promptober short story writing to pen a piece of poetry. What do you think?
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Thank you.
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So lovely! I like your take on it!
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Thank you🙂
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Here you go – https://amanpan.blog/2020/10/13/challenges/
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To purpose reason, love this phrase!
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Thank you, Liyona!
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Here’s mine: https://patbunnyblog.wordpress.com/2020/10/13/dusk/
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I love how the prompt was the concluding phrase. You did a great job with crafting the scene of the setting sun. I felt like I was there!
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I’m so glad you liked it!
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Here’s my take on this week’s prompt. Thank you!
https://aikalandros.com/2020/10/13/schooled/
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Loved the prompt! https://www.djranch.org/2020/10/13/fragile-time/
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Powerful words. And uplifting
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A Parting
Twilight drew near,
he blotted her tears,
believing he must serve.
In the fading light, she
looked at him. He seemed
to be already gone.
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😢 Beautifully melancholy
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Thanks, Midwest. Glad you liked it.
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I’m joining in for the first time… 🙂
https://theglitteringsoul.com/2020/10/14/alone-in-the-dark/
Thanks!!
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Dad’s Eyes
by Joe Inabinette
“He just doesn’t want to talk, that’s all”, mom said.
I hadn’t seen or spoken to Dad in weeks,
especially after the diagnosis.
I lived far away and it wasn’t easy
to get to where he was,
but I knew something was wrong.
Against my “wife’s” insistence,
I took the trip, knowing full well what was
at the end of it, waiting for me,
but all the same, I took it.
When I got through that crypt of a door
and after the eternity of time
it took to get to his chair,
I saw him–and wept…
He was rail-thin; unshaven,
and almost unresponsive….
Mom cried too, “I just didn’t know what to say…”
She would offer;
and ” I didn’t want you to worry”…
I was the only child, you see
with a family falling apart on it’s own
and trying to hold it together
while knowing he was coming apart.
I bent down to him and whispered “Daddy?, Do you hear me”
He turned slowly in my direction, and smiled ever so gently…
and, in the fading light
of his eyes,
I finally realized that
they were fixed,
not on me,
but on another shore.
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