to love brings melodious gifts
into a world shrouded with gloom
regrets to overcome once more
the struggle to create new thoughts
and move forward to happiness.
let us persevere to reach out
and chart our journey to bliss
and live as we are purposed to
©Franci Eugenia Hoffman
A gander at me –
I enjoyed a dedicated career in the insurance industry for over 20 years being rewarded both professionally and personally. Now it’s time for me to follow my dreams by doing things I enjoy…spending time with family, learning, sharing, traveling, writing poetry, and encouraging others to pursue their goals.
The streetbeatina is an eight-line poem with each line consisting of eight syllables. What makes this form both a challenge to write and uniquely different from other forms is that the first syllable of the first line is repeated as the second syllable in the second line, the third syllable of the third line and so on, the repetition of the sound of the syllable at precise intervals providing the poem with a natural beat and musicality. Although it is completely optional, the poet can emphasize the repeated syllable by either printing it in italics, bold, or a different color. – Paul Szlosek
This style takes some thinking. I have recently enjoyed poetry and will have to look into this. Great poem.
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Thank you and it does take some thinking. 😉
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Wow..you nailed this form Eugi
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Thank you, Mich!
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Interesting way you have used the repetitive word.
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Thank you, Sadje!
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You’re welcome 😉
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Congratulations! You have done such a wonderful job with your streetbeatina, Eugenis!😀
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Thank you so much, Paul!
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Good job!
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Thank you!
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