The poem I’m presenting today, is one I originally wrote in September 2016…..
Smoldering
My internal flame for her, still flickering
Burning like the old Olympic torch
Eternally glowing, without a permanent home
Charring the timbers of my defences
The leftover embers, blistering my soul
And I remained seared and hollow
A flame, not to be easily extinguished
A fire, forever smoldering in my heart
Ivor Steven (c) Sept 2016
G’day, and welcome to my blog site. My name is Ivor Steven, I live in Geelong, Australia. I’m an ex-industrial chemist, and a retired plumber, and a former Carer of my wife(Carole), for 30 years, who suffered from severe MS. I Write poetry about those personal thoughts, throughout and beyond my life as a Carer. I’ve been blogging for over 2 years, and writing poems for 19 years. Of course a lot of my poems are about my favourite subject Carole, but since I’ve been blogging my writings have become quite varied, humourous, mystical, observational, and even a few monster/horror poems. View all posts by ivor20
This is a lovely poem.
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Thank you Sadje, 💙🌏❤️
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You’re welcome Ivor.
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true love never dies…………this is perfectly and movingly written Ivor! it brought tears to my eyes…….
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Thank you Wendi,.. Yes… my perfect girl… ❤️💙🌏
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awww……..this brings tears too! 🙂
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beautiful, Ivor
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Thank you Annette. … yes… for my beautiful lady.. 💙❤️🌏
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Beautifully touching and heartfelt, Ivor!
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I went through that period of time when most of my writings were about my Carole and my personal emotions… 💛💛😊🤔
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❤️ 🧡 💛 💚
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Your continuing love for her is a beautiful thing to witness 💙
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Thank you for the mention, I appreciate your kind words….
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Beautiful symmetry.
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Thank you Chelsea….
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Oh how love stays in our hearts forever! I know your poem reflects love that is lost but this reminds me of unrequited love as well. Great work!
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Thank you Liyona. yes, very much a reflective poem… ❤️💙🤗
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