Here’s a poem that is a part of my heart, and written about the final time I took my wife to hospital…… I eventually became brave enough to submit this piece, and I was fortunate enough to have this poem published, in the Geelong Writers Inc, Anthology of 2017.
‘Til Death Do Us Part
She’s there, in that tall pale building of brick.
Where the Nightingales care and tend to the sick.
She’s there, away from home and her comforting bed.
Where the Doctors try to fix the endless ills, from her head.
She’s there, her absence, reminds me of future plights.
Where my anxieties for her well being, endure her fight.
She’s there, I need to visit her, all day, and every night.
Where the distance to reach her soul, is out of sight.
She’s there, I’m wondering about that far away dome.
Where her lost personal affection, would leave her all alone.
She’s there, in those misty clouds, with church bells ringing.
Where she’s near to the sombre sounds, of angels singing.
She’s there, her constant pain, remains tight in my heart.
Now I’m convinced, like I said, at the very start.
There’s no place like home, for her gathering dark.
And I promise to her, again, ’til death do us part.
Ivor Steven (c) 2012
A touching tribute to what sounds like a great love! Well done.
Amanda in Qld.
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Thank you Amanda for your kindness…..
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Great share Ivor. Thank you. This hits close to home for me. I know the words help get it out.
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yes the poem was very therapeutic for me….and still is ….thank you Ian…..
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Heart breaking.
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Thank you V.J, it’s 8 years ago now.. 😊❤️🌏
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Love this. A fitting poem to accompany these sad, troubling times. The emotion it conveys is heartfelt and very relatable. Thanks for the share Ivor
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Thank you Lazarus for your kind words
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As always, you’re very welcome Ivor
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A touching and loving tribute, Ivor! I can relate as I also experienced such sadness.
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Thank you Eugenia, and now I cherish my treasured memories 💙🌏
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A beautiful tribute, and heart breaking. Sending a virtual hug♥
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Thank you for the hugs Sue 😊🤗💙
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All of those whirling thoughts and emotions so well stated in this Beautiful tribute to your lovely wife. 8 years can seem like an eternity and an instant all at the same time. Take care Ivor and thank you so much for sharing this beautiful poem with the world.
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Thank you Elizabeth for your kind words and thoughts, and yes, sometimes it seems like yesterday, and sometimes “these days” it is an eternity.. 💙🌏… I’m a poem “These Days” very soon 😊💕
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This is beautiful. Thank you for sharing this.
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Thank you for your kind words 😊😏
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You write the most beautiful tributes to your wife. The link between the two of you is ever strong.
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Thank Nanette for your very kind words…. xx
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