Waiting Up – prikcab (Ian Perlman)

April 19, 2020 / prikcab [ Ian Perlman]

it’s late, almost early

overspun, my mind and stomach

knotted

lines you have crossed

now erased by time

leaving this pawn with no move

please come home

my heart is open all night

losing this love is not a choice

abstract by jsp – april 2020

#waitingup

#lookinginyourwindow

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9 thoughts on “Waiting Up – prikcab (Ian Perlman)”

Tanya

April 19, 2020 at 10:23 am

So simple and yet so profound! Loved it through and through.

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- prikcab [ Ian Perlman]
  
  April 19, 2020 at 10:27 am
  
  Thank you
  
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Lucy

April 19, 2020 at 11:44 am

Very visceral and heartfelt. This is an absolute beauty of a piece. I love how you wrote this and the rhythm is very enjoyable. Excellent piece!

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- prikcab [ Ian Perlman]
  
  April 19, 2020 at 11:49 am
  
  Thank you Lucy
  
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-Eugenia

April 19, 2020 at 12:15 pm

Truly delightful! I love this!

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prikcab [ Ian Perlman]

April 19, 2020 at 3:21 pm

Thanks!

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judeitakali

April 20, 2020 at 9:34 am

This is raw and so beautifully written

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prikcab [ Ian Perlman]

April 20, 2020 at 9:37 am

Thank you

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Donna Matthews

April 21, 2020 at 7:14 pm

Nice!

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