Dreaming Words
A special thanks to, ~M, Her Writing Haven, she’d just posted her first poem written many years ago, a writing full of feeling and emotion. So she’s managed to prompt me to post my first ever poem, from many many years ago, also full of feeling and emotion. Thanks again to, ~M….
I wake up
Dreaming words of you
Falling like the morning dew
You’ve been resting tonight
Under white sheets, out of sight
Once, you were mine to hold
But no more of being bold
And no-one’s at fault
Fate sent you a horrid jolt
I lie here
Dreaming words of you
I hear the flick of your bedside light
And you softly call my name
You smile at me, a sigh, a wave, Hi
Hi, I smile at you and sigh
Tears rolling down from your eyes
I grimace, shielding my eyes
Crying again tonight
The same as last night
Always, I’m here for you
Always dreaming words of you
Ivor Steven (c) 2002
So loving and tender.
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Brave…for posting your first poem but mostly for sharing your intimate and beautiful thoughts 😍
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It was a long time ago Donna, but when I read some of my old words, I have both fond memories, and sad memories, but my fond memories are now miles in front… 💙🌏
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Ivor,
Totally agree with Donna, so brave! Plus… wow… what a heart wrenching poem, absolutely beautiful.
Stephen
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Her smile and braveness keep us going….
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Indeed. Thank you so much for sharing this poem… you are a beautiful man.
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Beautifully written Ivor 🙂💕
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Thank you Christine, not bad for my first go 📖🌏
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No it was lovely! ☺️
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Beautiful and touching
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Thank you Kevin
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So very heartfelt and touching.
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Thank you Eugenia, from what I remember, it was a month before I wrote the next poem 💙🌏, and it stayed hidden in my desk for a few years, before I got the courage to show a couple of friends….
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such beautiful words that touched my heart!
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Thank you Wendi, 💙🌏 I hope you’re keeping well
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it is always a pleasure to stop by Ivor! Thank you for your kind words….
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oh how lovely to read your first poem Ivor, love described with respect and passion, just a truly touching piece to me.
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The poem was before I had a computer, … hand written, typed up on Carole’s typewriter, then hidden in my desk…… I think I wrote another poem about a month later…….
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such a treasure to be found and shared
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Touching love story Ivor and such an excellent first poem!
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Thank you Beth. 💜❤️
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