Softly destroyed
by your impatient hands
and ravenous mouth
aroused to a point
of unethical ecstasy
—
Eager my body
succumbing to
such erotic pleasure
begging you
not to stop
until I am left
in climactic ashes
*
©MidwestFantasy
November 2019
Ph-Alex Tihonovs
The last line, “in climactic ashes”, lit my fire….. 🔥😁
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Oh I am so glad! It’s always hard for me to find the right ending to a poem. Took me a while for this particular one. Thanks Ivor.
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Always my pleasure…xx
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Yes, I do like that last line:
until I am left
in climactic ashes
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