Haibun: Monstress

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Watercolor painting by Donna Matthews

I was never kinder to the old man than during the whole week before I killed him. His voice is raspy and weak as he pulls me in close. “My darling girl. My beautiful, darling girl. Why?” Rebellious tears roll down my cheeks. I want to be strong and stoic but I’m not. The wooden stake protruding from his chest spells an end for us both…he is dying and I am free.

mirror reflection
turning this way and that way
finding sheer delight
confidence filling a heart
bewitching monstress dancing

Today’s entry is Day 16 of 31 Nights: A Walk Through The Valley of Death and in response to Brave and Reckless’ October’s Monster, She Wrote Writing Prompt Challenge of “Monstress.“

The above piece is also written in response to Heretics, Lovers, and Madmen Quotable Poe October Writing Challenge. It is week three and I chose “I was never kinder to the old man than during the whole week before I killed him” from The Tell-Tale Heart.

The above poem is written in a form called Haibun. Haibun, is a prosimetric literary form originating in Japan, combining prose and haiku/senryu/tanka. The range of haibun is broad and frequently includes autobiography, diary, essay, prose poem, short story, and travel journal.  Learn more about various poetry styles here.

The tanka form is generally a short poem with the following pattern 5-7-5-7-7. In its purest form, tanka poems are most commonly written as expressions of gratitude, love, or self-reflection and can be read forward and backward.

Hey y’all, thanks for visiting the Go Dog Go Cafe and I hope you enjoyed reading today’s selection. I am Donna Matthews, a born and bred Texan who can usually be found writing, painting, taking pictures, or traveling the world on foot. I’m all about love, people, sharing, and doing life together and would love to get to know you. I host two blogs…the first, The DJ Ranch, documents my personal adventures while the second, Slay The Chaos, focuses on mindsets, technology, productivity and organization. Come on over for a visit sometime 💙

6 thoughts on “Haibun: Monstress

  1. That is an original haibun…the conflict us palpable…and the reason an logic of the writer there….to the writer! There is a story leading up to this of course, and I feel the empathy…

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