When the darkness envelopes the sky,
and the quiet surrounds the night,
her empty eyes look down into the abyss,
trying to start a conversation,
rather it converts into a monologue,
where the abyss just stares right back at her,
through her eyes to her bruised soul,
uttering not a word, just giving a blank stare,
as if taunting her,
where she keeps on questioning,
Will this ever end?
The pain of not seeing him,
Will this ever end?
The suffering, the agony of this distance,
Will this ever end?
The loneliness, the numbness,
leaving her asphyxiated.
Will this ever end?
she keeps on beseeching,
in hope of some relief,
yet, the blank stare of the abyss,
all she is graced with instead.
-THEMOONLIGHTREVERIE
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Oooh so expressive and I want to tell her that yes the light will come! Great job!
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In the end light always appear at the end of the tunnel ! 🙂
Thank you so much for your kind words ! 🙂
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You are so right!!
You are welcome! 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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Yes, me too!
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I’m glad, you do ! 🙂
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😊❤️
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Love the imagery you created 🖤
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Thank you so much for the read and your kind words ❤ 🙂
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The great abyss of sadness and longing. What a heart wrenching woe of longing with just a flicker of hope.😊❤️
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Thank you so much for getting its essence so right ❤
Your words are always so warm and appreciating, thank you so much for being ever so kind ❤
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You’re very welcome Moonlight! 😊 ❤️
I hope you have a wonderful day!❤️🌹
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Oh this expresses what a break up feels like beautifully
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Thank you so much for your kind read ! 🙂
I’m glad you liked it !
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A beautiful poem about the constant struggle we are faced with.
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Indeed. 🙂
Thank you so much for the read and your kind words, it means much ! ❤
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The blank stare of an abyss is so perfect for what you are conveying in this poem. Wanting a conversation yet no other side there to speak is how we feel so many times, missing that person. Brilliant job with the poem.
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Thank you so much for your wonderful interpretation of the poem. I’m absolutely touched ! 🙂
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My pleasure
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Muchas gracias. ?Como puedo iniciar sesion?
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