I just wrote
a really nasty reply
didn’t send what’s the point
you get your kicks
messing with people
stupid just like me
Sure my own fault
dumb to fall for it
for so bloody long too
so well done you
no doubt you feel smug
kept this fool believing
But just one thing
don’t come back no more crap
about hurt feelings
it’s just word whoring
‘You’ve a lot to give’
at least that made me laugh
I like word whoring!
And I too laughed at ‘you’ve a lot to give.’
You’ve a lot to give — but I don’t want or like any of it
You’ve a lot to give — not really, but I don’t want to hurt you any further
Awful line! Perhaps a good answer to it would be:
You’ve a lot to give — Oh, yeah? Like what? Tell me three things I’ve got to give.
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I didn’t want to encourage ‘her’ by adding any more! I originally wrote a prose version of this a while back as part of ‘Sam & Erin’s Story’ but like quite a few lines from back then it wasn’t them – but will be part of”Sean & Ellie’s Story’ – a much more volatile affair!
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Will you post any Sean and Ellie?
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Oh, Yes!
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I want to see how volatile they’ll be!
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you picked the best lines from that story, sarcasm and teeth gritting politeness, brilliant!
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Thank you very much – we’re born to it England!
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