Romance~
lives
breathes
wraps its arms
around love
holds conversations
between fingers and skin
sighs in morning’s smile
whispers in dusk’s touch
Romance~
makes moments
forevers
©MidwestFantasy
02/14/2018
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Romance~
lives
breathes
wraps its arms
around love
holds conversations
between fingers and skin
sighs in morning’s smile
whispers in dusk’s touch
Romance~
makes moments
forevers
©MidwestFantasy
02/14/2018
Ph- Google Images
Makes moments forever
love that line
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Thanks. Took me a while to come up with an ending.
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Really? That interests me. Because usually I just come up with a line like it somehow comes to me. How does the thinking about a line happen?
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I wanted to repeat the word Romance and had to think what was something new I could say that the rest of the poem had not. I wanted the end to show that romance can last, and I wanted to say it in just a few words. But I agree with you in that most of the time lines “just come to mind” without much thought. Other times, I really get stuck to find exactly the right words.
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That happens when I’m keeping to a meter or rhyming scheme. It sucks 🙂
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That really can be tough!!
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Exactly !!!!!!
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Reblogged this on The Militant Negro™.
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You my friend the perfect barista for today…
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