Inspiration Wall: Eternally (Triple Haiku)/Michnavs


Up unto the sky
Beyond life and even time
My treasure is you.

Over the night light
On the far side forever
My fondness is you.

And in afterlife
Farther than eternity
My passion is you.

I have been following the blog of DavyD “inside the mind of DavyD” for a little while now. I used to write long narrative verses. I seldom write short poems and verses, until i discovered his works. He writes brilliant and amazing short poems and verses most especially when he’d accompany it with an equally stunning photograph or computer generated images. And just then that i thought i could try it myself too. This afternoon, on the way home i took  this stunning photograph and wrote a triple haiku alongside as my expression of my eternal devotion to my beloved and of course as inspired by Davy’s beautiful short verses.

You can read more of my writing at Michnavs

2 thoughts on “Inspiration Wall: Eternally (Triple Haiku)/Michnavs

  1. Thank you for posting this brilliant piece of poetry Mich and glad to have provided the seed. I love the flow and rhythm of the haikus and they work well with your stunning image. The thought of going farther than eternity is mind-blowing.


  2. Excellent poetry. I envy your talent. I can not seem to control my words enough for the Haiku. My poetry, like my mind, is always wandering around. I lack the discipline that you have given this piece. Great job.


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